POINTLESS POEMS?

[rageandlove]

i write a lot of poetry
and sometimes they seem pointless
so how does this sound?...

looking in the mirror
a refliection of minority
in the streets so sick of my own heart
chooseing things and paths for me
i dont have a mind of my own
i'll never be able to get shown
close your diary shine the pavment
show the highest level of achevment
quike to be asertive and a remote of your life
this is it the one time you'll never win this fight

[moonlightgranger]

The one big thing that stood out to me was the multiple spelling errors... Yep, time to go back to fix errors!

Oh, capitalize the first word in each line, and put a punctuation at the end of each line!