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Post by silygoosetaco on Sept 6, 2007 10:59:22 GMT -5
maybe emo to some but oh well
This poem is dedicated to the exes i really cared about:ashley crosson, megan hernandez, brandee, and bianca nicole curry
when i first started dating you
i was happy as i can be
it was just so impossible
that you were dating me
all of you were beautiful
though none of u believed
your charm was so amazing
it took every breath out of me
u all kept me pure
all mind,body, and soul
all of your everlasting love
kept my loving heart whole
but what bothers me the most
and it happens all the time
i tend to screw things up
and then ur no longer mine
i always get afraid
that some day i might lose you
i always get afraid
of not knowing what to do
this causes me to cry
causes me to break
so much frustration
on how much i can take
the reason that u leave
is somethin i understand
for the feelings i cant control
is obvious no one can withstand
hate myself so much
for being me who i am
because the most precious things
alwayz slip from my hand
but even when i finally change
from all the bad things in me
its already too late
for all of you to see
i want to ask forgiveness
for everything in my life has been
but i asked for it enough
and i dont deserve it again
i just really want you all to know im really sorry
on how i was such a screw up
i wish we still had a friendship
but know i dont deserve it...
but have a great life
i still love u all
daniel
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Post by moonlightgranger on Nov 17, 2007 18:49:57 GMT -5
Ooo, how romantic!
Oh, and it reminds me of the song sang by this singer named Janus.
Oh, you do need commas or a punctuation at the end of every line, and a capital at the beginning.
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